Ch. 3

Where ever I was, I wanted to get out. It was one of those lairs that come from those scifi movies. It had a gothic look to it, almost like I was in the 1600s. There were steel black table tops around with chains hanging down. Even chains hung down from the black roof. Blood was stained on them and rust covered most of the steel. The floor was gray, and made of metal that looked centuries old.

 

I was suddenly on the wall, strapped down with iron chains. They were so tight my hands were actually bleeding. I was posittioned like I was on a cross, arms out and my legs straight, pointed. Chains were tied at my ankles, but didn't bleed like my wrists did.

 

I looked ahead and the midevil door slammed open. Two men wearing deep black robes walked to me. Then, behind them, was a man that would give you nightmares for weeks. He had long black hair, a black cloak with a hood up, and had silver cross earrings dangling down. But, he had a really pale face, ghost like, and deep red eyes like fire was blazing.

 

He stopped right in front of me. "Lauren. I've been waiting for you." When he spoke, his voice was beautiful, almost hypnotic.

 

"Who are you?" I asked, trying to be as brave as possible. Apprantly I sounded like I was ready to scream right about now.

 

The man chuckled darkly. "I'm sorry, I've forgotten my manners. My name is Naum. I would perfer Lord Naum but since you're just a guest, I guess you could call me whichever you would like Mistress Lauren."

 

When he said my name like that, I didn't like it. I don't really think I was here to be treated like royalty. "What do you want with me, Naum?" There would be no way in hell I would call him a Lord. "If you're calling me a mistress than there shouldn't be a reason for me to be tied up like this," I said with a shaky voice.

 

Naum laughed so hard that it could of hurt his vocal cords. "I'm sorry. You're right. You shoudn't be called mistress for the reason why I brought you here." He was right in front of me of all sudden. He lifted my chin up with his one finger. His finger was ice cold. I was forced to look into his pierceing red eyes. It was then, I figured out what he was.

 

"What kind of vampire are you?" I asked through clenched teeth.

 

He chuckled again. He leaned closer, up to my ear, and whispered in a menacing voice. "I'm the kind that is your worst nightmare. You have a right to be afraid of me. In fact, I have something, or someone, here that will send you into a frenzy, of what I've done to him..." He traile off and leaned away. He snapped his fingers and my chains were released. I fell to the ground and got back up. My wrists were bloody and screamed in pain in releif from the release.

 

"Might as well search for him Lauren......." he spoke softly. He vanished into thin air as a dark laugh faded with him. I ran out of there, to the door. I was truly afriad to find what, or who it was. Once I ran out of the door, it closed shut behind me. I looked ahead. There was a man, no, a boy, waiting for me. He had all black on. A black robe with the hood down, and he was kneeling down, looking down. I stared at him in fear. I was afraid to see him. The boy got up and stood up,head still down. He slowly lifted it up.

 

I was right to be afraid. I stared at "him" with wide eyes. He was truly a nightmare. I was ready to scream for what he was. I already knew he was a vampire, but he was never like this. I couldn't move. My knees locked and I was frozen underneath "his" eyes.

 

It was Edward.

 

He was paler than ever and he had piercing red eyes, reder than Naum's. Edward had really dark circles under his eyes and his bronze hair had some black in it.

 

He saw me, and gave a smile. It wasn't his usual crooked smile, it was an evil smile. He spoke. "Lauren. How very nice to see you."

 

I couldn't speak. His voice was so menacing, more than Naum's. I was more afraid of him than Naum. "Edward...." I whispered.

 

Edward rushed to me. He held my chin up with his finger like Naum did. But when Edward did, it was even more hypnotic. I was forced underneath my own will to look in his eyes. "I wonder..." he whispered in my ear. "I wonder... what you would be like.... the taste of your sweet flesh...." He grabbed me, and ran me to a long black gothic counch. I was underneath some kind of trance by now.

 

Edward was on top of me. He leaned down to my neck. I was so dazed that I didn't know what will happen.

 

He went in, and bit my neck.

 

I felt him suck some of my blood out. It felt so good, like a drug. I was forced there, underneath his grasp. He let go, and pain rushed through me. I was changing. Blood dripped from his mouth, like a demon. Before I drifted, he leaned into my ear one last time.

 

"I hope you join me... in the next life Lauren. I'll see you soon, in your new form."

 

I felt him kiss me on the neck, as I drifted into uncoscienceness, in pain.

Author's Note

the picture of edward is how the vampire edward looks like. i thought it would be cool!!!! more will come soon! *wondering if ive been reading or watching to many vampires lately....* the scene in the movie twilight where bella figures out that edwards a vampire and has thhat dream bout being bitten in a gothic place... thats how my bite was.....

Reviews

[Ashbug:)]

I think the vamp he was hunting for was that naum and i think naum caught edward and did tht to him, i dont know about where lauren went...maybe naum has her?

[Martina]

I don't get it . . . . . I think Lauren *Character* had to much food . . . . good but I just don't get it. I mean they were in a graveyard, Edward was hunting, Bella was also in the grave yard but where did she go? THIS DOESN"T MAKE SENSE LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!