I'm Complete

I'm Complete

A Poem by Hotaru Miyuki
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I was reading breaking dawn and this just popped in my head. I think you can figure out what this is about with Edward and Bella........

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All I ever wanted,
was someone who would care,
someone so beautiful,
someone with tempetation,
tonight I will have it,
he holds me close,
underneath his will,
close to his chest,
that's hard as stone,
his hands glide across softly,
across my skin,
his lips move with mine,
full with friction,
full of wanting
full of resistance,
resistance not to kill,
I giggle, he groans,
While I'm enjoying myself,
he's being tortured,
he doesn't understand now,
but he will recall this,
and will want to do it again,
I know it,
but for now,
my life is complete,
with my forever love.

© 2009 Hotaru Miyuki


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Hotaru Miyuki
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I really liked it. It could picture it so clearly in my mind. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Is this about the part when Edward and Bella are you know making out lol? good really good

Posted 15 Years Ago


OMG awsome job gurl keep doing those kinds of peoms

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2009

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Hotaru Miyuki
Hotaru Miyuki

Stratford, NJ



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Hi. My name's Lauren but I like the name Hotaru. Hotaru means Firefly in japanese if you want to know. I love anime and manga. Here's a list of some I like... Naruto Bleach Inuyasha Fruits Baske.. more..

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