Tears Of Life

The rain falls,

raindrops are like tears,

it's like the sky is crying,

for either a loss, or event.

 

Drops fall on me,

as I walk through ,

why are tears coming from my eyes

as I walk through green and grey.

 

Raindrops are cold,

tears are warm,

I never really got that

but it numbs my mind.

 

I feel neglect,

my friends treat me like nothing,

I wonder if I am important,

or just an extra to them.

 

Do I have a purpose,

I don't know,

no one cares...

I only wish for love.

 

Hatred is around me,

glares stare deep in me,

my tears crash around me,

why doesn't no one want me?

 

Why do I act this way?

Will I ever have a future?

I walk through the dark clouds,

around tears of life.

Author's Note

based on real events after an incident with my friends............

Reviews

[Martina]

Loved this

So well written and if your wondering, I'm going on a reviewing spree lol

[maria valentine]

wow, amazing how things come out when things get to u that's how i am..very good

[Leah C]

Painfully good, I feel your pain Lauren. That's what a writer is suppose to do, make people feel what they feel. Painfully good :]

[Alana]

wow. i really loved this poem. i could tell that you were feeling pain just by reading the words. wonderful use of words. Great job :]

[Starting Over]

Hon. I have went through this also! I feel like this everyday and you did so great getting your emotions in a poem! Everything will get better, everything happens for a reason!