Preface

Preface

A Chapter by Hotaru Miyuki

I heard the stories of the werewolves but I never belived them. I thought it was nonscense. Was there any proof that they excist? Legend claims that if you are bitten by one, you will become one yourself. You would transform into a wolf every night. There are two types: the Zema and the Leto.

Zema were the good werewolves. They have powers that include super speed, excelent vision, and a great sense of smell. But legend says that even though they are human, they feel more comfortable walking on fours. So if you ever see someone walk on fours in a casual way, they are a Zema. Zema is the Russian term for winter.

Leto, however, are the evil werewolves. Leto have one extra power which is great sense for tracking. A Leto could track down someone in less than 5 minutes. The bigger problem is that Leto are immortal. They never die unless a Zema bites them. Leto is also a Russian term meaning summer.

So if you're bitten by a werewolf, you could turn into either a Zema or a Leto. I never heard of anyone who has even heard about someone being bitten. I don't believe in any of this. By the way, my name is Leah Dashmore. I'm just a 15 year old girl who never belived in any of this crap. That was until the day that changed my life forever...



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I like the start of this, however it would be nice to see more of Leah come out in this Preface. It is very factual and giving a lot of information to the reader at one point. Instead of strictly talking about the these types of werewolves add some things in there about Leah that relate a bit to the werewolves. I hope this helps. By the way i like the way you use Russian words for the different types of werewolves. The one thing i would change though is reverse the two names. Since the winter's are quite harsh in Russia, and since you are using Russian words, I would call the bad werewolves Zema and the good werewolves Leto.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmmmm. Interesting! I'm def. going to check out the rest!! :]
Oh, and side note: Twilight rocks. I love all the little icons on your page :]
aaaaand, I'm assuming this is like twilight too? maybe just not the same characters?
Who knows, I guess I'll see :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Really interesting beginning! It's read very fact like, I would like to see more of Leah's character in the writing but I'm sure she develops in further chapters. Can't wait to see how legend becomes reality! Great start :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Hotaru Miyuki
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