Timid Fire

The title fell in my head, and out came this ...

Distant light shining;

with eyes closed,

I stare at the sun.

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

its orange isnt it? ;)

[Andromeda]

simple and sweet. it's like a photograph.

[Melinda]

It's easy to stare with your eyes closed.. Just keep what you've seen with you, and continue looking deeper.. :)..

Sometimes the lightest touch hits you the hardest..

[Kyle A. Smith]

I like how you are saying your eyes are closed but you are still staring..

Nice and short.
I liked it.