The Madness in the Emptiness

I opened my eyes and saw white

I was stood there

In my night clothes

Alone

I turned around

All I could see was white

Nothing else

No end 

No beginning

The only sound

Was my breathing

Frantically I whimpered

I wanted to run

But where?

I wanted to curl up in a ball

But why?

I wanted to call out

Who else was out there?

Was this Death?

No, was this Hell?

It was different to what I expected

A flash of red

NO

Two red eyes

A shadow flit past

Was it a shadow?

Breathing on my neck

No one there

Echoing laughter

From every direction

I screamed

I tried to sit up

But the holds on the bed 

Held me down

I saw two concerned eyes

I blabbered on about what I saw

The man in white shook his head

He turned to his colleague

The other sighed

And pulled out a needle 

It pierced my skin

I didn't care

They needed to listen!

There was something out there

Out in the white 

The red eyes 

The eyes followed me here

The men walked out

Looking at a clipboard

I screamed for them to stop

They ignored me

And left me in the room

I felt sleep suddenly come over me

I opened my eyes and saw white 

Reviews

[Mary C]

beautiful write--a most splendid piece for sure !

[Wolfwind]

Wow! This was an amazing flow of imagery and suspense. It makes me wonder what had transpired that led to this scene and what might happen after. Great Ink!

Aaron

[Mr. Revan]

A never ending cycle!

Actually sat forward. QUite suspenseful ^_^