I can't really give it to you but you can give it to yourself..

I can't really give it to you but you can give it to yourself..

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

i dont know where it is ..

you cant quite get it

it sorth of attachs to you like glue

or like the girlfriend that dont ever let go of you

thats to clingy

but you want it

i doubt it , the tremendous emotion the many assumptions

as people critcize and others say its impressing

do you understand the way the choked words you never spoke come to life

and the emotions flow like lava trying to kill life

but at the end its suppose to be beautiful,

like God just hit the refresh button

but this aint just God its you your heart

your pain

your grain of sand that you used your

hurt that fuse

to heal , to wield

to yield and watch how traffic runs

to go when you see the true greenlight

its sight

insight

outsight

open doors

close

and new ones open your finnally focused

your finnally flowing

do you feel it

write it could be magic, the easter bunny santa claus

with the present and taking out the past

whatever you want write

it will appear to whipe the steam off the mirror you will see yourself and the people behind

you aiming for your back ,

but do you turn?

its your turn show them you are release yourself in the words you write

gripping the pen tight rocking steady

breathing heavly

breath in heavenly then

commit succide

live

as a poet, writer or storyteller actor trying to feel better

all that rolled together

or neither

remove labels

upset the balance

make things happen as you sit rubbing your chin

thinking this is interesting

im breathing these words

so can you find you in all that you are

break apart yourself

put together your health

oppose yourself because no one is your enemy but you

and that mental devil

and the demons that follow

but thats becides the point

point that at the paper

and write and see what you find

as this is something that you cant quite get

but attempt to give yourself

give your treatment .....

 

Edet Sira Tis love is all...

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr


Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
the world doesnt understand? No people dont understand themselves care to find out... Edet Sira Aristede Craig Jr tis love is all peace love and harmony love hearing oppinions not because anything i write will change but its fun to know we think.....

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Again, the way you have about expressing...anything through simple words is amazing, this one especially.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

holy Sh*t....that was one helluva ride! Wonderfully written and expressed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you know josh i just might

Posted 13 Years Ago


you still got it yo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is one of the most profound journey's through words, life, ever! Brilliant work love..so much to think over!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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A lover striving to be lovely more..

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