The Existing War..The Balance

The Existing War..The Balance..

they want more,

as i think up storms create alarms

 that ring in your heart

to warn, of danger...

to warn that you may be on the wrong side of the scale

 join love...

you werent met too lose it because someone bumped you

or you step on they shoe because they accidently step on your shoes

but i undestand lovers and haters they want more

so they tip the scale over

 just to see if someone will balance it out

we both play games

but how much it hurts others can be a bigger amount,

 its a diffrence

sometimes those lovers have kisses;

kisses and hugs

kisses that lure new lovers to the side of love,

hugs that imbrace to comfort and keep them by way of, love

but sometimes hate has friends, lust, anger

love aint no stranger of seeing the danger

so it wants more, so i think up storms that create alarms that ring in your heart, his heart, their heart, back up?; back up! all of a sudden we have back up

a group of lovers yelling back up,

 by bring happiness,Godlyness,

and love even when love is barely present some how

you can see it sparkle

leading us to be Gods lovely angels

By:Edet Sira, Aristede Craig Jr

Author's Note

another oldie but not as old as the others quite beautiful actually .... tell me your opinions as i love them . ummmmm enjoy its like feeding your heart yummy lol

Reviews

[Derek S.Keck]

Beautifully written and the form flowed so wonderfully! I find its not that poets are seers, its just that most poets live with there eyes open and don't refuse anything, no matter how ugly or wrong something may look. Great poets ask others to live with there eyes open (Bob Dylan, Langston Huges, Allen Ginsberg), and thats what you did with this piece. Great piece!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid oldie but pertinent one till this day...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Fabric Pulse]

I'd have to agree with Derek, beauty has been written. :)

[Ruth]

I really think this is one of the best pieces I have read today! Your metaphor streams like a river of vivid thoughts!
I am amazed!
Such a fine balance here.....you know, this is a fav and serious kudos!
xx

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is very thought provoking.