What's Right? What's Wrong?

I have a couple of mis demeanors

problems things that seem wrong

 

not right

i have a coulple of multiple of

things that seem right

should be right

but is it right

i got pictures hanging on the wall of the hallways looking at me to go their way

but am i selfishly going my way

doing what i want putting together what i need,

slowly to proceed

and make to what it means to be me

am i even capable of writing a good poem anymore

something that can hold my rights and wrongs

can while i am emotionless, motionless,

unless i continue doing this

poetry, amazing things that they have for me

like pills and medicine to cure me but see,

this disease is the succidal emo, the cutter

the one who bleeds until dry and dying under,

theier own blood

what i am and what you believe i will be may not match

because im not you him her or them even calling me a poet aint close enough

you know why because you dont have the right words to tell enough

and quite frankly , right; nor do i

Author's Note

i dont know if it flows but i knw its what i wrote .......

Reviews

[Ruth]

Excellent! And without words, we would fall! And whatever else is wrong or right with the world......well.....they can shuffle it round....indecisive and I LOVE this! Written perfectly! xx

[~DeathByButterflies~]

It's wonderful. The way you wrote it flows perfectly.

[Spiral Panda]

I like how you on one line refer to poetry as being similar to pills, that medicine. I just titled something for someone called that, "Theraputic Poetics..." It's so true, if we didn't have this outlet we'd all be goners.