Give Your LEtter to Your Birthday

So what if i take a pen and create,

make, cook up bake ,

that beautiful cake you wanted lit candles be blown out

what if i help you breathe when im there,

and take your breath away,

when im away,

slay me because if i stay to long i become your sucide note,

you would kill for me , you would kill me for me;

you will make me not breathe by witnessing your lack of oxygen,

and me i would write and speak until i...

  until by some miracle you did,

until you rose on two feet and i crutch you up you wont fall i have you

until you get that present you wanted,

until received me, like i was been delivered in a letter to tell you

happy birthday in a letter to tell you to love me

and feel the love from the present you receive because before you read this letter next to you i am standing, im here, im the tear you won't cry unless you want to but when you do,you wont let it dry, you won't whipe it off your face

so face; it I love you  PS:Thank You Feburary 26,1992

 

 

Author's Note

To My lovely girlfriend I'm glad you were born..

Reviews

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until you rose on two feet and i crutch you up you wont fall i have you
until you get that present you wanted,
until received me, like i was been delivered in a letter to tell you
happy birthday in a letter to tell you to love me

I really loved these lines,
This is really amazing & beautiful.
Hope your girlfriend really enjoys this.

[Spiral Panda]

The love is distinct and evident. Spoken of by a true romantic. The poem flow is wise and passionate, a rose in bloom.

[Alicia Hirshey]

Awww. This is so sweet. It is a lovely present.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Thanks it was a while since I wrote something new