Night time Sky Rise

Nighttime the Night sky Rise...

by Aristede Craig Jr. on Saturday, December 26, 2009 at 10:24am

have you ever known the night sky to be the star,
it’s always on spotlight moonlight star light sun light that far light
it bathes in all light
it has lovers amazed as they gaze
it shows mystery and makes people desire its complicated maze
but people don’t realize the night sky is a blaze
set in the fire of everything above us
everything loves it just look above us
just look at its beauty enhanced to be visible by the moon and every other source
leaving the sun to remorse and corpse at night
but it always give light to its wife the moon creating that spotlight;
a spotlight for the main star of the show the night sky
to give people this relax appeal
so they can view this star and its beauty
its quite amusing
how we see what are mere decoration to the star
the one that the spotlight is truly on at night
at night the sky is the thing that truly is made bright
but it remains out of sight
in many eyes who the star is the night time sky.....

By:Aristede Craig Jr.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Fascinating pov in this one! I am taken to so manmy places through it :) Really makes the reader think past that castness of cloud and so called sky...we each perceive it so differently lol
Excellent poem my friend!
xx

[Spiral Panda]

Lovely title, composition settled.

[.......]

amazing write,
enjoyed reading this. : )

[TJ]

Good work