My Angel

Just a dream, romantic prose to say what I feel, having come out of a long and bad relationship. The darkness has passed.

My Angel

In my dreams, an angel soars high

Flying on invisible wings, a small smile

Bright happy eyes, burning bright

She laughs, always just out of reach.

No malice in her gaze, only warmth

Stepping lightly, skipping in the rain

The earth cannot bind her, as free as the wind

A shadow, barely seen.

What brings the angel to my dreams?

Is she taunting me, or luring me to my doom?

Why do her words bring tears to my eyes?

Hide from the truth she sees.

Standing strong, bent, unbroken

My tears are many, a river unbound

Not swept away by pain.  It is mine!

I rule my heart!  Don't I?

Her song sings of love, free from pain

A dream in shadow, but not forgotten

A mist seen, but who can capture it?

How does she see what I've hidden so deep?

Who is this angel?  Who invades my heart?

Gentle laughter, dancing out of sight.

The sky opens, warm rain pours from heaven.

Tears of the angel, and love's gentle kiss.

Author's Note

Just simple four line prose.

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

You made me cry........ I could feel your submission to ALL and unreserved you let your heart pour out such beautiful love and this poem was born from it.
I think this angel is your soul self= You are that Angel ! And her visions and songs are your hopes and dreams.

These lines:
What brings the angel to my dreams?
Is she taunting me, or luring me to my doom?
Why do her words bring tears to my eyes?
Hide from the truth she sees.

these lines are your fears, You are afraid to really believe, you are afraid it won't come true and this might even affect the results.
Let go and believe what your soul-self shows you. your higher self knows.

[Solitary Traveler]

Fearful? Yes. I wonder if I will see the truth when it is there, and if I do, will I believe it? I am afraid that whoever I find will.....well, that might be information for another poem. :) But thank you for the in depth review. It was nice to see that my poetry has an effect on people.

[Solitary Traveler]

And there was always that dream I kept close. Just pure love that binds, builds up, and brings happiness. No hard or harsh words, no anger, and though everything is never just smiles and cotton candy, that pure love I dream of only keeps growing brighter as the years continue on.

[Cryingkate]

Maybe the vividness means your getting closer?????

[MsJewel]

Tears of the angel and love's gentle kiss... Beautiful, beautiful poetry. We all need angels to brighten our dreams and heal our hearts. This is lovely.

:) Julie

[Solitary Traveler]

Thank you, Julie. Much appreciated.

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

I completely love this line....."Tears of the angel, and love's gentle kiss."
Love can be blind but an Angel's kiss is a mark even in your dreams.....
My pieces are dark...I wish I could write something so beautiful as you have here

[Solitary Traveler]

Thank you, but even your darkness has beauty.