Swimming dreams

Swimming dreams

A Poem by rogue_butterfly
"

mermaids are in this world but they are not seen.

"

As the water is flowing around

There is something that moves without sound.
The one that swims with beauty
That listens to the song of the sea.
 
As the hair of gold flows like silk
Shells on her necklace as well as pearls.
Her legs like a fish but her still human.
No one knew what to call her for a long time
Her kind are mostly still hidden.
 
A mermaid is what she is called.
She sings the song of the sea and ocean
The water is her home and always will be
Her life is so beautiful
When one is seen there is magic in the air.
 
One that is human and fish.
One that is normal and magical
You see one and your life is changed forever.
 
As the water is flowing around
There is always something moving without sound.
Something that swims with beauty
Something that also listens and sings the song of the sea.
They are like a dream that are in the deep blue sea.

© 2008 rogue_butterfly


Author's Note

rogue_butterfly
it was fast so dont critisize to much

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"As the water is flowing around
There is always something moving without sound.
Something that swims with beauty
Something that also listens and sings the song of the sea.
They are like a dream that are in the deep blue sea."

I just love your last stanza here, this is a very beautiful write, i like this alot.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"As the water is flowing around
There is always something moving without sound.
Something that swims with beauty
Something that also listens and sings the song of the sea.
They are like a dream that are in the deep blue sea."

I just love your last stanza here, this is a very beautiful write, i like this alot.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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