rain and a wanderer

it is about a wanderer that returned to his home that was distroyed.

falling from the sky

we feel it on our faces.

rain that is so wonderful and refreshing.

 

this night as the rain falls

there is darkness.

where is everyone on this night?

 

they have fled a village

a village that is in rubble

where there is nothing left.

 

blood of animals is everywhere

fire still burned the wood

wood that was once a house with a family

 

shocked and sad is a wanderer

seeing that his old home is no longer there.

what will he do?

 

the rain still falls as nothing is done

and the wanderer stands there

alone.

Author's Note

dont minded about the grammar but anything will be great

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

gosh, you have a way with mysticism, and surrealness
it reminds me of a particular movie, with Nichole Kidman, so ever
scary, eeeee! great work! xx ,mishel :S

[JadedSparrow]

I read this poem a few times, but not because I couldnt understand it. I love it. I like how it tells a short story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[A Lost Man Found]

I enjoyed this. it is very interesting. I think you would llike my poem society's demise.

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A very sad picture is painted by your words; unfrotunately, the wanderer is one of many "alone" wanderers in this world. Thank you for sharing