My Reflection: Regression

Regression by Eden Falls

As I stare at this hour glass of flesh, I wander between my body’s and my mind’s eye. Fixed on a point now, curious of hereafter; I should feel blessed, I’ll never age, grow hateful and old. Too many live their life in reverse.

 

Why shouldn't I? Stand the test of time through trial and all of that which it brings; lust, greed, scorn, and illusion. Now that, as alluring as it may be…I shall have to decline. 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Stand the test of time through trial and all of that which it brings; lust, greed, scorn, and illusion."

A wonderful write...:)....................

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Wow this so' lovely!!! :) Some real inspirational write here :) well done and love the form :) Thanks for sharing :) cant wait to see more of your work :)
-Drake :)

It's like I know you for years, your style, your way of wording things, your music choice, wonderful, all in the deepest sense of being. Sometimes, feeling as you describe here, is needed... great work...

- Elisa

[Michelle N. H.]

I'm honestly very moved by this. Your words mixed with the crying sound of the cello.. It's dramatic and quiet at the same time. So impressive. Life here is an illusion, and I often have to remind myself of it.

[Frieda P]

The music suited your reversion well, I like the opening line, drew me in. Food for thought here.

Should be either, body or body's..... and my mind’s eye

Enjoyed the read.

[Eden Falls]

Yes, you are right.