Rhythm of the End

A poem about the end

Stars have fallen on the cities and the plains,
Caught by mountains and skyscrapers' hands
The sky kisses the Earth and so do the airplanes. 
Could the world be ending in a display so grand?
There is nowhere to hide and nowhere to go.
Heaven has made it's choice for us below,
I dance with you, to the rhythm of the end, for I know where we shall go. 

Author's Note

Tell me what ya think :)

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you very much Edenexile. Thank you for taking the time to write your lovely poem tailored to suit our contest. But could you please try to edit it by adding your own art work....any simple sketch or drawing that you can make yourself to suit your words and add it above the first line to your poem. Also as a thumbnail.it makes so much difference.
Please await the seven day contest results. All the best!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Season of the Apocalypse!!!
Edenexile, you have painted here a picture before my mind which prevails even after i log out...so i log back in and read your work again!
In the midst of universal chaos and destruction of epic propensities and proportion, you are assured of safelty or rather the logical solution along with the one in question. God, anti-god, lover, parent, child, sibling, friend...or a total stranger or inanimate being? i dont know....
If you ask me....it just might be that its your own soul that you might be dancing with...since everyone else has perished and you have escaped or progressed somehow (the the earthly body might have perished in the holocaust) and all that is left is the eternal pair....the mind and the soul.
But then again...this whole poem of yours might be an Aphorism. :)
Nicely compiled and ends just as nicely as it starts its meandering but short journey of the final destination adventure!

[Edenexile]

Thank you very much! :D I tried to write it so that the dancing partner could be anyone, God, friend, lover, etc., but I didn't think of it being the soul. This goes to show that sometimes you don't know what a reader may picture from reading what you write. Thanks a bunch for your feedback, I enjoy hearing what the reader feels. :)
*and I will draw something soon and post it.*
Thanks again!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes and dont forget the thumbnail too...the thumbnail picture is the primary illustration which shows the reader a glimpse of your work alongside the title.

[Edenexile]

alrighty!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yaya!