Teenager

Teenager

A Poem by Eden-Rose

I am a teenager,
Too old to be a child, too young to be an adult
I make stupid decisions that aren't entirely my fault
With so many emotions that I can't comprehend
Sometimes I love life other times I wish it would end
The world scares me and makes me never want to leave home
Though sometimes my parents drive me crazy so I'm already gone
Searching the world and web trying to find me
This world can get overwhelming when you're a teen
But you get some courage and stand tall
Because in this world there is a place for all
And though sometimes it's hard to find
Just keep your head up and you'll be fine

© 2017 Eden-Rose


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I am a teenager,
Too old to be a child, too young
to be an adult
I make stupid decisions that
aren't entirely my fault
With so many emotions that I
can't comprehend
Sometimes I love life other
times I wish it would end. Well written, I think this is the poem I was searching today.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you very very much.
Deep

7 Years Ago

Welcome. Keep posting your good works!



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Taz
Stong words of encouragement at the end, well done my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!
So true! Well, teens are stuck between maturity and immaturity. Well portrayed and relatable.
This is totally me:)
Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Nicely portrayed.

And of course the reality is that adults make even more stupid decisions than teenagers with less excuse and no less hormones!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Lol so true
I loved this, my boys 15 and this sums up the world for him I would imagine. Exam time so we always on his back about revising, I hate it and feel bad for him but if we never he would not do any studying so I can totally relate to your "parents driving you crazy" line - it is so tough but make sure when your my age you have loads of fantastic memories to look back on - good and bad :) well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed and that you could relate.
I am a teenager,
Too old to be a child, too young
to be an adult
I make stupid decisions that
aren't entirely my fault
With so many emotions that I
can't comprehend
Sometimes I love life other
times I wish it would end. Well written, I think this is the poem I was searching today.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you very very much.
Deep

7 Years Ago

Welcome. Keep posting your good works!

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Eden-Rose
Eden-Rose

Ansted , WV



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I'm tragically nerdy and I have a passion for music and writing. I also am terrible with words and I suck at writing about myself. I'm also sorry that you wasted your time reading my bio. ~Love Eden&.. more..

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