Teenager

I am a teenager,
Too old to be a child, too young to be an adult
I make stupid decisions that aren't entirely my fault
With so many emotions that I can't comprehend
Sometimes I love life other times I wish it would end
The world scares me and makes me never want to leave home
Though sometimes my parents drive me crazy so I'm already gone
Searching the world and web trying to find me
This world can get overwhelming when you're a teen
But you get some courage and stand tall
Because in this world there is a place for all
And though sometimes it's hard to find
Just keep your head up and you'll be fine

Reviews

[Deep]

I am a teenager,
Too old to be a child, too young
to be an adult
I make stupid decisions that
aren't entirely my fault
With so many emotions that I
can't comprehend
Sometimes I love life other
times I wish it would end. Well written, I think this is the poem I was searching today.

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you very very much.

[Deep]

Welcome. Keep posting your good works!

[James Keller]

What an impressively spot on description of being a teenager. I remember feeling these things myself.

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you very much.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

An exact description of many, its so annoying juggling life with one hand, wait until the age of 20 comes around, that is the stupidest year in life.

[Eden-Rose]

Ha yeah,Thank you for the review.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah, that's awesome to read, well I'm a teenager as well ...loved it..keep sharing

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

[Jonathan]

So relatable and the honesty of the poem is astounding. The words just seem to fit and the rhythm and tone just ooze out of the poem.

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you so much!

[Alicia Cubatoso]

that was awesome! Nice job!

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you so very much!

[Ava gray]

im a tennager and some one should tell my mum and dad

[Gina]

This was outstanding and must be relatable for many people! I really enjoyed your way of bringing out the emotions through the words and rhyming in a unique way. Keep it up!

Always, Gina

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you so very much, for your kind words.

[Gina]

No problem, it was my pleasure!

Always, Gina

[Sonakshi Arora]

Lol! I am a teenager too and I relate to this so much! The hormonal changes are rude to me :p
Great job and keep it up !

[Eden-Rose]

Lol, thank you.

[Hari Om]

well i wud say that this poem was very ironical to your bio... loved it

[Eden-Rose]

I'm glad you enjoyed.

[Alan G Stephens]

The thoughts and feelings of being a teenager are well expressed here.
The poem doesn't pause but instead moves from one thought to the next.
A true reflection and an enjoyable poem to read.

[Eden-Rose]

Thank you so much !