The Mask

WE get the mask that hides us from the world somewhere....right?

Some say
it was ciriuosity
others say
it was a mistake
but of coarse
no one ever wanted it
how could someone
want it?
Something
that hides
who you are
and makes you
a new person
but wether or not you mean to
you still
pick up
the
mask
but
as a child
We don't know
what the Mask is
Somehow though
we end up finding it
or it finds us
and thats when
we start to be
someone
else
entierly
thats when
we've found
the
mask

Author's Note

you don't know where this is going, Ha but I do XP lol please R&R

Reviews

[Katy Otto]

Its very good!
I think I understand your point of creating en entirey new person, just by changing appearance.
The only thing I could advise would be a little more punctiation.
I like how your broke up the sentences to emphasize on certian parts,
but it does get a little confusing trying to find the end of a sentence.
Keep up the awesome work!!