WAIT!

WAIT!

A Poem by Eddywards
"

Before you left there was so much I should have said, but I didn't, why? Because it's not like you'd even care. I missed my chance, unless some how you come across this.

"

WAIT

before you go

there are a few things

that you need to know

I'm sorry!

I'm sorry

for everything

For letting you down

for making you mad

for losing you

but mostly

for letting you go

I should have told you

The truth

That I Love you

more than a friend

That at night I cry

because I miss

your greenish

brown eyes

and your black

messy hair

But mostly because

I missed my chance

I'm usually

Stronger

than some boys

but when

I talk about

you

I can't hold in the tears

I just wished

that on that night you left

I had the strength

to ask

you

to

WAIT

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Eddywards


Author's Note

Eddywards
There that is why I've been a horrible writer(not that this is much better). So you know the drill ignore errors and stuff. Please Review and tell me what you think.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

The flow was amazing and really good. The fell of your poem was deep down in the heart. Amazing work. The most amazing is the use of word wait.

Posted 4 Years Ago


i really like this because it feels so desperate..

p.s. Dont knock your writing!

-Chuck

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You defiantly have a very unique flow to your work. I like the purity of honesty of this piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

87 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 3, 2008

Author

Eddywards
Eddywards

for me to know for you to never know, AZ



About
I'm just a small town girl living in this crazy world some of us call home. I've got goofy friends who I love to death and my family too. But I know that there are hard times(trust me, been there) And.. more..

Writing
who i am who i am

A Poem by Eddywards



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..