it rained last night....

it rained last night....

A Poem by Eddywards
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last night thunderstorms brought up some old memories again...

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It rained last night

First this summer

I should know that it did

I stood out in it

and cried

It made me think of Jr.Mints

and ice cold Dr.Pepper

Petes fish and Chips

and green eyes

A crooked smile

Letters on a window

that you formmed with the rain

but mostly

I just thought of you

and how you no longer ran over

When the monsoon came our way

Last night

I stood in the rain

and cried

for you and nothing more

 

© 2008 Eddywards


Author's Note

Eddywards
Ignore spelling and stuff and stuff,

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Actually the spelling of the word formmed made me think of M&M's, I think because of your descriptions of candy and stuff and stuff. Anyway, I loved it, I could really feel what you were saying.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Who cares about spelling? I sure don't! Your good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad. lovely and touching...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eddywards
Eddywards

for me to know for you to never know, AZ



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I'm just a small town girl living in this crazy world some of us call home. I've got goofy friends who I love to death and my family too. But I know that there are hard times(trust me, been there) And.. more..

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