half past

My friend can't get it through his think skull that he should stop. So hopefully this will help. This did not happen, and hopefully never will.

WHY?

Tell me why did I get a call last night?

Why did they tell me you were in a wreck?

and why did they tell me the news?

at a half past sometime they called

You didn't know everyone was at my house

that when I was called everyone was

I bet that put a damper on your brothers birthday

I bet so did dieing!

That peom ment nothing then?

nothing at all?

I asked you

no I begged you to stop

yet last night

at half past sometime

I get a call saying you're brothers dead

that you're alive but he's not

because YOU were drinking?

Why were you driving?

did he not try to stop you?

Oh wait he didn't know

He didn't know that we threw him a party

and now he never will

but they say it wasn't your fault

lies

they say the other guy was drinking

lies

The other guy?

your brothers best friend

he feels guilty when you know it was you

I hope this eats your soul

I hope you never forget

and think

I wrote you a poem

about you in a coffin

Dead

cold

but insted it'd your brother

nice move

I better not get another call

at half past sometime

ever

again

Author's Note

Please don't criticize the grammar or spelling because I'm not good at that just try to prove a point here...

Reviews

[Spat Queen]

It really shows that you have a thoughtful side. I like the composition. Really good.

[Face In A Crowd]

I don't care about grammer!!!! That was wonderful within itself. Don't drink and drive. There's this sign by us that says "In memory of Kelly please don't drink and drive" It's really sad. You have a great poem here.

[Nature9000]

I like it, you shouldn't ever say you're not good at something though, be proud of your work! This is very good! Always remember that with everything, you will get better in time.

[Poeticpiers]

An all too often told tale You make your point well but would carry more weight if you checked your spelling before posting