I gave it to you

another one of my poems that doesn't ryme(gosh, I hate ryming(no affence to other people) ) But this one goes to an Alex McCabe who needs to learn that most girls don't like being cheated on and lied to. or having their best friends talked about badly.

I gave it to you

You said you'd take care of it

You said you'd never harm it

You said you'd always have it

You said that and I believed you

you lied

simple as that, you lied

You let it fall and shatter to peices

You basically stabbed it in the back

You left it to wither alone in the dark

You called her

You asked her

you told me no

after you already said yes

to me

then she said yes

thats when you turned into

a cheater

a lier

this all happened

when you broke

my heart

Author's Note

like all my writings Ignore grammar or spelling errors because I don't really care. I just needed to get this out.

Reviews

[Spat Queen]

My life's theme. I so get it. I like the use of the word it. Very good use of channeled energy. Great poem.

[Teenage poet]

I feel your pain. For i've been through that exact same moment. Your emotion is so powerful in the first couple of lines you can tell how angry and hurt you are by him. Very wonderful keep on writing no matter what anybody tells you. It's miraculous writing.

[Teenage poet]

I feel your pain. For i've been through that exact same moment. Your emotion is so powerful in the first couple of lines you can tell how angry and hurt you are by him. Very wonderful keep on writing no matter what anybody tells you. It's miraculous writing.

[PianoandPage]

good angsty poem.

i like
"You called her
You asked her
you told me no
after you already said yes" - nice back and forth rythmn here.

i also don't really like ryhming.