Junkies Mess

Pt. 3/10 of my 2 year poem Absence

The thoughts of you and what I�d like to do
Have been long forgotten
New imagery fills the mind
Like the day the sunset shined
As bright as the noon sky

Much like our love of yesterdays
How dreadful the notion is
That I can not be with my love
For to love a love is wonderful
Unless that love has turned fiction

To only be able to be with you
In dreams and in day gazes
Is a mere mad mans proposal
It sets the tone for depression
Oh to never be able to hold the hand

Of the one you truly care for
Or kiss upon the lips that I truly miss
The ones that were once always there
This absence isn�t fine
Our bodies need to be entwined

As well as our hearts as they were
Back in the days
in which the days stood still
And the our perfect times
Would have matching scenery

With one another�s eyes
seduced into each others
I can only imagine a junkie
Having withdrawals such as mine
-Thoughts return to you-

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

interesting meter to this one - well stated, articulate poetry about love and loss.

[thecoolone52]

not bad, not bad, i liked it, one of those loves poems again