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A Poem by Ed Rector

It�s early in the night
Want to see the sights
Got no place I have to be
Won�t you come with me

We�ll walk the streets
To see who we can meet
Don�t know what to do
Just hope you�ll come to

The night is young as we
So baby come with me
Maybe we�ll get stoned
Won�t feel so alone

Chourus
(This night I�ve got no plans
But we�ll walk hand in hand
You can be my women
And I will be your man)

I think I�ll venture on
Through the night till dawn
And if you come with me
We�ll see what we can see

The night time has begun
It�s time to have some fun
Let�s get out of this place
Find a new head space

(Chourus)

Just me and you my girl
I will dance and you can twirl
Through the night we�ll last
Won�t think of the past

Don�t know what we�ll do
Just know that I want you
The night time�s built to last
by morning it�s gone to fast

So girl come with me
And we�ll see what we can see
Don�t know what we�ll do
Just know that I want you

(Chourus)

© 2008 Ed Rector


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this song has some good points to it. some poignant verses, and good rhythm, but some parts it does lack in my opinion. it seems to be a little more forced toward the end, and in places it just seems as if it is said for the sake of it instead of what would fit better, like the line about getting stoned. it has a great rhythm, especially the first few verses, but as a lyric, as a poem, for me it doesn't work.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Ed Rector
Ed Rector

Santa Cruz, CA



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skateboard, write, lyrics/ poetry, play the guitar and am looking for a shorty. more..

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