too late rider

 

too late rider

hunting sour-cherry dreams

is running madly

on the ember fields

spots of  illusions

to catch last drop of tears;

sad monument of regret,

made from quicksilver

if you were,

sometimes

it is

too

late

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

woo hoo!!!! I found a piece of writing that actually had some reviews :)

it's the little things in life . . . especially on days like today

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succint and seemingly futile. Intriquing write - thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Zane Mathias]

Great Write truely enjoyable

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i enjoyed this piece a lot good usage