Words

Words

A Poem by EdFutinski

People are trained

To believe

They know

so they’re given

Few                     notions

Shallow

   Seas of undiscovered words

That

Are yours

are vulgarized

so No one knows

Them no more

No one asks

For a  meaning

      an answer

                              truth 

   Deep roots

In

Your inner self

Society          erases,

mutilates,

     disfigures

Every single day,              century,        second

Find

Reinvent

Free

Save

Yourself

 

© 2008 EdFutinski


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oh!
oh, yes.
'people are trained to believe they know.' or maybe we're not even trained. maybe we're just born arrogant.
because, it's not even that no one knows, but that no one CARES to know anymore.
it's the outlaws with the words trapped in grimy pencils; the ones out scavenging the world for truth... it's they who live. watch out for them.
this is meant to be griffitied on back alleys. ...




Posted 13 Years Ago


I want this one posted in big letters, somewhere that I will see it every day . . . these are important words. Maybe the most important.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this one is not half bad. i rather like this one. i mean the grammar is shoddy and all that , but like i am one to talk. so this i would say is the better one of yours i have read, and thank you so much for dedicating your poem to me.
it is not everyday that royality is properly acknowledged so thank you for doing your part..lol
as i said crybaby tale is all for you....
i hope you take this better thna you did the review of my review..lol
i was not meaning anything against you or anyone. i am just stating the fact that those who cannot write really well should not criticize those whose writing may be a bit more sophisticated than their own.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is very true on todays society :) great write

-Aaron

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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