La vie en rose

there is this pink
piece of toilet paper
on my desk
too thin
to suck the tears

Reviews

[E. M. Murren]

Wonderful write. The complexity of this simple work is astounding. Many cheers.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

ha - wasn't expecting this, at all!! love the way you put the color pink there too.... it worked well.

and i know exactly the kind of tissue you're talking about - it like dissolves with your tears. great image.

hugs

[Gary H]

Intriuging. This tells a story of sadness and gets the reader thinking about what has caused the tears. I can see what Natasha means in the way the story comes across and is one that draws you back again and again. Great work.

[Brenda Sue]

Short and sad, very sad it seems. Wonderfully penned.

[Natasha Ashway]

It's like you wrote this backwards. We hold it up to a mirror in the end and catch the image of falling tears. A brief, sweet and delicate heart tug of a piece.

[JR]

That was good. I realy enjoyed how it seemed like while you were wrinting it you gave it an almost 'light' air but at the same time you can tell how sad/mad you are. For such a short poem it was quit lovely.

[Legion]

Wow, what a feeling of immediate sadness and depression without even knowing what is wrong. Great piece. Damn that thin piece of tp.