I, Below One

 

My body is clay

And the process has begun

A feeling of soul absorption

Sucked into the black hole I’m orbiting

 

Zero recognition, zero…

Sparks to ignite? None…

Zero anti-flame for an anti-force

Zero below one

Zero opposition from the main power source

Zero means none

 

The fog around my feet

Is visible in the dark from my seat

Floating upside down melting inward, above the fireball

My clay decays to soot

From the heat

The sparks sucked from my heart

 

Zero recognition, above the fireball

Sparks to ignite my clay that decays to soot

Zero anti-flame from the anti-force

From the heat

Zero opposition from the main power source

The sparks sucked from my heart

 

Zero…none, zero below one

Zero means none…but I, but I

Zero means none…but I, zero means…none

 

The fog around my feet

Binds me to my seat

Sucked around the black hole melting inward

Formed a fireball, from the heat

The sparks sucked from my heart

Turned against me to decay my clay

Zero rebelling opposition from them

To stay away

Betrayed by my own body

Judged with the help of another

Sucked into their belittling nether

 

Zero below one

Zero means none

I am no one

A nobody

Zero below one

 

Absorbed, sucked in

Zero means none

No chance to explain

Because here I mean nothing

An absolute of zero

 

Is all

I am

Author's Note

I am writing poems about specific feelings currently, including what i feel with imegry i thought up at the time, this note is to clear up any misconceptions, enjoy

Reviews

[linley{luu}]

I really enjoyed this, I like the format too; it keeps your eyes engaged.
You can really feel the feeling behind this.
It is very good, very well written.
=)
Linley