Personal Beauty

 

 

 

Personality

And the rare form of care

Unconditional kindness

Always generous

Having a smile caress

Your share of personal beauty

Hidden in the subconscious

All the eye candy driven back by

The thought

Do I look fat in this dress

 

I’m very bad at keeping secrets

That I know I do not

Need to keep

But some

Hold their truth

Overcoat, black bowler, and red phone booth

Selfish beauty

Selfish beauty

Forgotten truth

Your selfish beauty

The gorgeous inner flame

A lost subconscious game

 

Dark brown hair

With blue

Hazel green eyes

My beauty

Personality to share

Unconditional kindness

With flare

I produce effect

One of the best

That I can bet

One of the worst to most

An evil debauchery

I agree

I produce the most common form of envy

 

My personal beauty

My personal beauty

Say it with me

My personal beauty

The best

Everyone’s envy

 

Your included

I can’t think of anyone that isn’t

 

My personal beauty

My personal beauty

Say it with me, say it with me

My personal beauty

The best

Everyone’s envy

 

I’m very bad at keeping secrets

That I know I do not

Need to keep

But some

Hold their truth (I point toward you)

Overcoat, black blower, a suspicious character

Because your selfish

Selfish beauty

Because your selfish

You’ve forgotten the deniable truth

The gorgeous inner flame

A lost subconscious game

Personal beauty, the kind that isn't well feigned

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

Yep , not much to say , true beauty lies under the skin and isn't well feigned ...
A nice piece of work, showing admiration and beyond what is on the surface
R

[Destinee]

I have this feeling that there is a meaning in this beyond the obvious that i can't seem to grasp. It was beautiful, strikingly vivid and full of emotion. Very good write!

[linley{luu}]

Wow, very nice. There's sort of a melodic flow to it; like a song. I could hear someone singing it. Very descriptive. I could see the overcoat, black bowler, and red phone booth, but I think that's what you were going for. I applaud you.