Cisum

This poem I wrote here, for you, the readers

The beauty of music

It has been said too many times

Yet to me it hasn't ever been cliche to say

 

I name the feeling cisum

 

Music raids the mind

Through your ears and into your soul

Nibbling on a sensation on the back lower end of your brain

Making silent moans

 

Say cisum backwards 

 

All sound silent, absent

From nowhere a fade in of music

Then the colors start to disappear

Umbrella to rain, slow motion to get near

The music from the cadillac over there

Open door and leather interior

A port key to a sound orgy extravaganza

With a gate sign stating "Anyone of any class, of any race, of any....is allowed in here"

 

Cisum the minutes of expression

The minutes of acceptance

Originality for the numb at heart

 

Floating on rhythm

Some travel above clouds

Some enhance naughty thoughts

I know that I just get aroused

 

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Music sure is something else. I get a lot of my inspiration from the songs I listen to as I'm sure almost every other writer does. Anyways, this was really awesome! You have a very unique voice and style. I could copy and paste a quote that stood out to me, but that would be all of it. Everything is phrased so interestingly, with that individual style of yours. Long story short, I loved this. It was amazing :]

[indieRokker]

::Umbrella to rain, slow motion to get near
The music from the cadillac over there
Open door and leather interior
A port key to a sound orgy extravaganza
With a gate sign stating "Anyone of any class, of any race, of any....is allowed in here::

Very impressive Stanza!
Cisum is a beautiful word on it's own level, the contrary of Music is a creative word.
This was an amazing read. Highly enjoyed.
Keep writing, you have a lot of talent to offer.

`indie

[linley{luu}]

Music is my life. I have to listen to something when I write; I can't just do it out of silence. Anyway, this really touched me. I loved it. Your voice is something else! "Say cisum backwards," that made me smile. I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good works!