Weird Thoughts

Those moments in everyone mind.

Some thoughts are kind of weird by themselves

thoughts that weren’t supposed to be there

Like never-ending fingernails in your hands that doesn’t let you grab any choice

Like fog straight to your glasses, or putrid stares on your direction

You weren’t supposed to think that at all didn’t you?

I guess that your mind it’s already clustering itself in your thoughts

Like a cocoon that never lets air in

Few of those silhouettes are even paying attention to you

Hard to breath, even harder to walk

If there’s a light at the end of this tunnel you sure as hell are closing your eyes

So you are pretty much between a rock and a hard place

Should you yell, so everybody hears, and maybe nobody cares?

Should you hide yourself in the pain of someone else trying to absorb his innocence?

You little prick , wonderfully always thinking too much

There’s no time now, now think… think those weird thoughts

All because… you ask yourself…

Did I farted?.

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

hahahaha xD That was awesome... I was not expecting that last line and then...wow...hahaha. Sorry,
huh hum... I am composing myself ... Okay you had some really deep lines entangled in those weird thoughts, my favorite:

"Should you hide yourself in the pain of someone else trying to absorb his innocence?"

That was pure brilliance ... loved it, so i am now going to have to read all your poems in hunt of those funny and deep lines. Again...just awesome!

[Anita Singh]

"wonderfully always thinking too much".. Favorite lines.. Thank you for sharing! :)

[just Penny]

This is packed with interesting similes, my favorite being "Like never-ending fingernails in your hands". A dark, powerful write that speaks of relationship woes. Then suddenly "bam" with that last line ! Your title fits really well lol. Something different that I enjoyed reading. Penny