Give me Three Bottles of Whiskey

Give me Three Bottles of Whiskey

A Poem by Ecnelis
"

Give me three bottles of shimmering, golden poison

"

Give me three bottles of shimmering, golden poison

That I can pour down my aching throat

So it will numb me, tingling, from the inside out

And get her goddamn face out of my head

So I can finally get some sleep tonight

© 2010 Ecnelis


Author's Note

Ecnelis
As I took a break from drawing, I took my dogs on a walk. This is what I came out with.

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I adore this! I understand that feeling of having that woman's face in your mind. It can drive you crazy. I love the three bottles of golden poison. That was just excellent!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, yea break-ups can be ugly. it's so sad that people have to drink to numb their pain! :(

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hah i love this! i can hear the narrator in it very clearly. my one suggestion? change the first "and" to "tso it".

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2010
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Tags: free verse, sadness, break up, ecape

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Ecnelis
Ecnelis

Orlando, FL



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