Rain

It hurts

The rain

Like tears

Of pain

 

You're gone

I'm lost

My heart's 

The cost

 

I wait 

Day by day

For you

To come my way

 

But you don't come

And weep I do

For I still

Love you 

Author's Note

very short poem that i wrote. please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Beautiful in your metaphor of rain, so like tears. Your poetry is filled with the emotion that flows from the loss of love. Wonderful write!

[Undying Glory]

short, sweet and really sad, i could feel it all the way, even after the poem. i think it's pretty good and i really liked the ending, it added to the whole feeling of the poem. good work