Caged

Some days I feel like I am locked up in my own head..

A lost touch of reality
brings forth a rhythm of steel
Forgotten memories, stir once more
Though nothing seems to make me feel

I cannot break through this menagerie
The shadows on the wall have begun to speak
As words of hatred fill the air around me
I am consumed with thoughts that make me weak

Author's Note

I had to write something using the word "steel".

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

When we are consumed with our inner demons that is when we need to be srong the most.Great use of "steel" lol:)

[Angel of Chaos]

thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

This was very realistic and relevant to so many poeple. I hope you have steel nerves of patience...:)................

[Angel of Chaos]

Thank you... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

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Your poem here speaks to me as I lost it on Thanksgiving I felt that way, I allowed every demon to consume my life that early morning, But I turned it around for the better giving it over to God in a place I never dreamed id be.
I was lone in my fears
caged to ever see
my moments were in tears ,was this a dream
cold and alone with fears all around
Nothing but steel and concrete was found
I closed my eyes begin to pray
In arms wide open with words at play
I was breathless and pure
wonders carried in a will
Like a storm racing, it became my meal
I hungered in pain
But it became so plain
To peace was my feel

[Angel of Chaos]

You are never alone, though you may feel like it. The key is to recognize where you are at before it gets too bad.. reach out and embrace the people around you. Write about it but NEVER let it consume you.

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Im not alone anymore:) that day I embraced a life and joy:) Light consumes me now ttys my dear friend:) Have a bless day:)