Faded

What happened along the way
When did the stars from your eyes begin to fade
I cant place a time when I last heard you laugh
And that beautiful smile you once had
It turned upside down
And I don't know how

Can I be the one to put the stars back in your eyes
Can I be the one to make your world right?

There use to be a time when our breathing was a melody
Your whisper was entrancing, and my words brought you to your knees
We use to hold each other tight
And whisper sweet nothings into the night

What happened along the way
When did the stars in your eyes begin to fade
Please tell me what I can do
So I can bring them back to you
The fiery spirit you once had now seems tamed and tired
And the burning look within your eyes seems to have retired

Can I be the one to put the stars back in your eyes
Can I be the one to make your world right?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful write indeed...Thank you for sharing...:)........................

[Angel of Chaos]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

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This was beautiful spoken in a deep pouring of will :) I loved it words from an Angel:)

[Angel of Chaos]

Thank you for the kind words.

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Your very welcome :)

[Scott Metro]

...an age old story....what the hell is the matter with everybody...what the hell is the matter with me..?
LOL......
Your story told well.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[annabellee]

Nice write, it has a good flow and rhymes. I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Angel of Chaos]

Thank you I have revised this several times.. the middle keeps getting to me.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[kumars]

what a smile you always have.