Heat of this love ~girl~

You don't understand me..

There's nowhere

For it to go anymore

(The heat

Of our love)

The grey clouds

The sunlight 

Casts a shadow

The twilight changes colour

This world blurs

Even so

Will I still

Love you?

What should I do?

How can I?

I know this

I'm stupid

I feel

Unsave

Ardent love

Is a sin

"I want you understand

My feeling

I'll show you

My true feeling"

My voice gone

However much I scream

I'm not in 

Your field of hearing

The sky cleared

Before I know it

It's doesn't

Cheer me

I can't hold 

My feeling back

How can I..

What should I do..?

I'm not going to cry

...

"I love you!"

The heat of the love

Lit the war

I didn't

Choose this way

I'll show you

My everything

And steal

Your gaze

Prepare for the next attack

Love is blindness

I'm fighting a losing battle

Your kiss open my eyes

Author's Note

This is the same story
I make the other version ^^"
Enjoy~

Reviews

[Saddam]

A write of thought and feels like a film before my eyes.

[Black Raven]

Your writing is very passionate. Filled with lots of love. I really enjoyed reading it.

[For Who I Am]

A very thorough emotion! I love this poem! Keep up the good work.!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this poem is simply amazing. Very emotional, and very in depth in the description. Great write, my friend.

Kaze~

[sona]

Difference our love ...
Loved every part of it ... hope to read more of your work

[Justin]

that was really good, it tells a story insides itself!!! keep it up :)

[yuki]

very interesting it made me want to read ore as I went through the poem :)

[Dominique]

It is an interesting poem, and I like how you have the lover trying to show how they feel to the other person, while still being unable to do so. It was a wonderful poem.