Fall in Love ~robot~

A robot fall in love to young boy, but can she withstand with the overflow impulse?

What I see at the 

First time I 

Open my eyes was

Your warm smile

An impulse

Run trough 

Over inside me

It's strange

Your voice

Warm me

Your blue eyes

So clear like the sky

You ever talk about

Love

What's it that?

You answer with troubled face

I feel

I like you

Is that different

From love?

I want to

Fall in love with you

Can I?

You chuckled

I enjoy the time with you

I like about you

Isn't this called love?

I don't understand 

Happiness and sadness

Despair and pain

All of them

I don't understand

As a robot

I could say this

I think I'm in love with you

And I want to cherish this feeling

Author's Note

I'm sorry if it's a bit long
N also I'm very long time not writing
Enjoy~

Reviews

[Bluefire]

Could use some editing.
But anywho, I live it anyways. ^^
I like the story,
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This is cute makes me think of
a Japanese anime like Armitage the Anime
but she was a Robot and a human half and half.


very nicely penned Thank you for this wonderful piece.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[Hibiki]

Yup! I really like anime ^^

Thank you~ ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I like Anime also my Favorite is Howl's moving castle. you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Hibiki]

Ah, Howl's moving castle
I watched it 3 times >

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

not sure how many times I've watched it but it has been more then 3 times :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem is so sweet, and cute. I loved it. Very nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[Hibiki]

Thank you~ ^^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, it was my pleasure reading your poem. :-)

[sona]

Wow... Its really great, really liked it
The feeling of love and all emotions .. Awesome..

[Hibiki]

Thank you~

[For Who I Am]

Happiness and Sadness
Despair and Pain
All of them I don't understand
Wow! I love this poem. No words to explain....!!!!!!!

[Hibiki]

Thank you~
I'm glad u like it

[Hibiki]

I mean, u love it ^^"

[For Who I Am]

LOL me too.

[yuki]

very cute and adorable:) wonderful poem hibiki :)

[Hibiki]

Thank you~

[Saddam]

As a robot
I could say this
I think I'm in love with you
And I want to cherish this feeling.

It is very rare love but it is.... An ultimate love poem. I really really like it.

[Hibiki]

Thank you~
I'm glad u like it ^^