Heart Broken

Being in love with someone that doesnt feel the same.

I dont smile like I used to

Or laugh like I did before

All I know is that my life has changed

And now I hate it even more

Every little thing

Reminds me of us two

Like when they play our song

I cant help but think of you

And when I see your face

It just reminds me of the past

Both good and bad memories

Make me wish that it could last

But you dont even care

You just moved on with each day

You didnt even take a second glance

To make sure that im okay

So every single night

I cant help but let tears fall

And even though you hurt me

I still wish that you would call

I really dont know the reason

But you are always on my mind

I try so hard to hate you

Yet love is all i find

Why did you make me love you

If it was nothing but a lie

I just wish that i'd never said hello

So that I wouldnt have to say goodbye

But you dont understand at all

To you it was just a game

And I bet in a few weeks

You wont evenn remember my name

To me its sad

How I thought it was all true

And how I wasted so much time

Being in love with you

Author's Note

to DUTCH JR. - is this one long enough for you lol ;-)

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Still not long enough!! Nah, but this is really good, emtional work. Love is a hard thing to understand, it can bring forth our best and our worst. Being in love is like a roller coaster. The rhyming and word flow is better than I've seen you write, too. Good write.

[J Todd Underhill]

I thought it just long enough. Each poem has it's own life and the poet writing it is the only one who can determine the length. So as poets we are gods, and we need to use that power carefully!

[Michael X]

this is heartfelt and real, the emotional grace is a heartaching feature
that delivers a form born of desire and wishes, lush context,
youve done an excellent job here, thanks for sharing your talent

[sammyj]

wow good start, keep going, don't hold anything back let the whole thing out, even if you have to rip it out of your soul.

[Tia Sanchez]

UGH. Ali's so silly.

This is great! I love the flow of the words. They seem to sing to me.

[loveLOST]

ii love it !!! it describes somethiinqs ii feel too :(

[EboneeAlexis]

Aww thanks so much buddy =)