Two Years Ago

  Two years ago

  you said you

  loved me.

  Two years ago 

  you kissed me in

  the rain.

  Two years ago

  I was in your arms

  as I cried.

  Two years ago

  you yelled at me.

  Two years ago

  you hit me.

  Two years ago

  you said you

  had to go.

  Two days ago

  I saw you.

  Two days ago

  I cried in my

  bed.

  I wondered

  if you saw me

  two days ago. 

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

Hmm, the flow is really good. And the emotions are great. I kinda feel like this is a true story? Just because I kinda feel like it is :P but I love it. The only critique I have is that at the end, the last stanza, yuo should put a question mark. Other than that, it's perfect (:

[Coffee Vampier]

wow this has really good flow :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the emotion in this poem. Emotion is a good thing and a bad one. Make us desire things we need to stay lost. Thank you for a excellent poem. I like the question at the end.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

Love usually starts out as a fairytale but after a while a person starts to show their true colors and sooner or later changes to be a hurtful destroyer of your love.

[halflives]

Sad, yet to the point. Well done. I'm sorry that this happened to you. There are some people in the world that just do not simply understand their impact on other people and believe they can just plain leave whenever they feel necessary. These are selfish people. Do not let them bother you.

[WordNerd]

AMAZING!!! I love the flow.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was dark and a bit scary, but its good that this person
is existing outside the boundaries the other individual's life.

[ImagineItAll]

Aw, this was really heartbreaking. You should be ready now to write a poem telling this person how strong you are and how better off you are without them! I enjoyed this, very much.