I'm Here, But You're Not

  I can feel your green

  eyes staring at my back.

  I can hear your voice

  echoing through my ears.

  You are here,

  you are real,

  you never left

  at all.

  You stayed here

  in my heart. 

  I now can feel your

  body moving past mine in

  a rush and I can

  hear your laughter.

  You don't see me.

  You don't notice me.

  I am just another picture

  on a wall to you. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strong and honest emotion in the poem. A old Leonard Cohen song called "Finger prints". Every time we allow someone to touch us. Their touch is remembered and put in a drawer for storage. I like the ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[qaralynn]

Nice write! I love the emotions in this..Especially the end is good!

[brenda]

OMG!! i can so relate to this !! and the guy that i like is the same way it sucks when the guy doesnt notice you !:P great write btw!