This Place

First poem :/

  I don't wanna be here,
  in this house
  filled with broken
  memories.

  I don't wanna live here,
  in this place filled
  with broken glass
  and broken hearts.

  I don't need to be in
  a place like this.

  Where nothing is
  beautiful
  and we are all
  a mess.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

This feels like a poetic journey into shadows of my past. Your poem is composed with a musical grace that carries me with a fluent flow.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this poem because it is powerful. I know how you feel though...I don't want to live in my house either, but we have to do what we need to do until we can leave on our own. I loved it. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a good message. Hard to be stuck in a place where memories can twist-up everything. The poem was honest words and very direct. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Anonymous]

Darkly true... Seeking beauty in the wreckage of blandness. Nicely written; short and to the point. I enjoyed this. Thanks for posting.

_Cloud

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

I can relate to this pretty well... but anyway its a good poem

[*Evelen*]

This is why we have writing, to run away and hide and create our own place. Well done.

[The Kids Are Going To D..]

This was really good...I liked it and I could relate.