The Circus of the Smile

Story.

May 1st 1990
    
    A late evening wander around the park. Beyond the treetops I spy the tip-top of a circus tent. I make my way towards it through the trees.

    No sign of life. I traipse right round the circumference of the tent until I spot a pair of open flaps that serve as the entrance. I am drawn to them. 

    A sprightly young man appears out of the flaps. He is wearing a three piece suit and his hair is slicked back. He has clearly been transported in time from a 1950's Hollywood dinner party. He bows his head towards me.

"Room for one more, Sir." 
    He doesn't make eye contact. His accent is...foreign and he is smiling widely.

"What's the entry fee?" I ask tentatively. The man laughs.
"No charge for you, Sir." 

...you have no sense of adventure Andrew, you never take any risks and that's what makes you boring...

    The smartly dressed young man leads me through the flaps. I am immediately blown away by the size of the arena. There are at least fifty rows of raised benches....yet they are all empty! 

"When will the show begin?"
"When you are ready, Sir." 
    
    I assume this is a joke and laugh politely. I follow him up past nine rows and then he indicates where I should sit. My place on the bench is marked by a sloppy red 'X' painted on it. Panic grabs me. 

"Where is the audience?" 
    The man smiles for me and I feel... entranced... soothed. 
"This performance is especially for you, Sir." 
    
    Without another word he dashes back down the stairs and exits the arena. My heart is pounding. I am overwhelmed in a rush of fear and excitement. I am possessed by pure adrenalin!

"Let the show begin!" I yell. 
    I clap my hands. I stamp my feet. I hoot. I whistle. I scream! The light in the tent dies and I sit on the edge of the bench and hold my breath





September 8th 1990
MISSING
Andrew York, 23
Andrew has been missing from Glasgow
Southside since May 1st 1990. Despite
enquiries over the past four months Andrew's 
current whereabouts remain unknown. 
His family are shocked by his uncharacteristic
disappearance. They just want to know he's
okay and urge him to contact the Runaway
Helpline on 0808 800 7070. Andrew York is
of slim build with blue eyes and short black 
hair.

Reviews

[Sound]

Very intriguing read. I liked the complete mystery of it all and unlike the others commenting on this story, I think the missing newspaper clip added the sheer creepiness of the whole mess. It was almost as if Andrew was sucked into the nightmare and never woke up again. This was very good for being so short. Awesome job. 100%

[Craig]

Hmmm? Perhaps you are the show and everyones watching you as you sit in the chair a target. RED X Waiting to be smashed with a giant Pie. 80)

[Taylor H]

i think the guy who smiles a lot is the scariest person. but i dont really get what all that last bit of info had to do with your story....

[Taylor H]

creepy lol

[Courtney]

hmmm....this is pretty cool. original and sci-fi-ish. i kind of agree with rachel about the lack of transition to the ad....maybe delete the ad altogether? i don't know...
GOOD WRITE! I enjoyed reading it.

[Cam]

Got me hooked! I really enjoy cliffhangers. Leave me wanting more :)

[Simplicity]

It's short, but it leaves the reader wondering "What happened next?" instead of going into all the gory details. Personally, I really like it. Thanks for submitting it into the "Halloween Tributes" contest.

[thecoolone52]

wow dude i loved this one......... very short to the point and im wondering what happeand to him? Thanks very much for entering the contest..........a great read

[Chillbear Latrigue]

This is really creepy and original. The setting was brilliant. You brought out the emotions in the character exquisitely. I felt his panic. The creepy ad at the end was also very chilling. I want more like this. Not necessarily the same topic, but stranged disappearances. This could be a genre.

[Lydia Wegner]

I really enjoyed the story, but I wish there where a bit more clues as to what happened to him; perhaps I am not bright enough to catch them..