Ultra-Love

3 Ideas.

Wipe that guys blood off your lips before we f**k .



A space man crashed through my window n landed on my bed. there was a long silence.
n i said are you hurt? n he said hold me. so i held him.




Lets ride the train to space! Raring tearing around the universe circling the stars hush lila dont tell pops were never coming home! Woooooooosh
 

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

I love this:P

Its really short, and random, and it leaves a lot to the readers imagination:P

Its fun to think of whats going on in the sentences. Each is like a picture that were left to imagine what goes on next, or what happened just before and what not. It makes us(well, me) think.

Very neat, short and sweet:)

[KonxOmPax]

Lol I love that first line. The second...pretty interesting. It's not every day a space man crashes through one's window! More please.

[LeeLee Ryder]

1st idea... in your face ... as they say in yoga ... Warrior One... Bravo!!
2nd idea> Bowiesque yes... Very intriguing ... Strangers in spacial paradise ... I likexxx
3rd idea~ Universal circling.. wish all of us could experience it, 1st hand... Love train rides... It'd be a out of body experience...
Ultra-Love has great potential to spread its wings into three stories or to play close to the bone and mutate into one... Kudos East
LLR

[K@^^3r0n]

Woah. This one was definatley a thought tosser. It made me think a lot, in which i love that. It gives you several ideas of whats going on, and that is good for a reader. It makes me want to read more of your work. lol.

[Voice11]

wow three great ideas, I'm sure these make your mind spiral!

[Sarah Hawkinson]

I liked the first idea the most. It would really grab a reader to read on.

[Craig]

I enjoy reading your stories. It makes me wonder.

[babyblue]

wow perty good story it's tripy

[Writeress]

What a rush.
Shocking, random, tender, and free. In a nutshell.

I think someone has a thing for trains.

[Chandler]

It's really catchy. The whole thing had me thinking to myself. Ultra-Love?