Unfortunate Presence

Take this, they said

You'll feel better, they said

instead, I feel nothing

nothing but the blood rushing through and pouring out of my veins

nothing but the beating of my heart, slow

nothing but the quiver of my lips grow with intensity

The sun feels brighter these days but my mind stays in the dark

the figures dancing around my head glare at my with those yellow eyes

the same eyes that I've seen in my dreams; and now my nightmares

Shivers run up and down my spine

The night is no longer mine, but theirs

Author's Note

possibly some grammatical errors. But be honest! Tell me what you think! Please?

Reviews

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well i take it as a night terror....very descriptive, look forward to seeing the finished product

[Alicia Santos]

this is the finished product lol but thank you. i appreciate it. definitely about night terrors, but also about drug use

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it says at the top still working on it... or i wouldn't have said that... very descriptive work

[saratogaparty]

DAMN!

I know what you mean though, the nothingness but the workings of your own body. Sometimes it feels good, sometimes you want to scream to the sky and ask for a life more ...fulfilling.

[Baby Ricochet]

Spookey. I like it

[Holly Mason]

interesting to read
pills cover up so much thank you for sharing