Success Is Failure

However don't fail to comment that would be a crime to wiggle through the shadows of life with such a brilliant opinion only you have share it with me

I don't care what you do
as long as you tried

I don't care how many time you failed
to fail you still had to put effort into it

I don't care if you succeeded
that just means you should climb more mountains

I don't care if your scared
the only way from darkness is to walk out of it

I don't care if you don't care
we all need something to live for

I care that you tried I care that you pushed yourself
a success that was smooth is weak we grow in struggle

Author's Note

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[CA Anurag Sharma]

I agree with you but unfortunately we are not judged by our efforts but by results.... success without struggle still remains the success.... I liked your poem a lot though.... another good poem....

[Eagergreen]

Success without struggle seems rather hollow we don't pat Einstein on the back for being smarter than toddlers we give him a pat on the back for creating new ideas and ways to look at things which is a struggle

[CA Anurag Sharma]

How many actually know that Einstein's career was a sequence of failure in his earlier days.... we just salute his achievements.... Even I agree that failures are necessary for the success to shine but we have to admit that world only acknowledges the achievements and not the efforts....

[Eagergreen]

A famous quote of Edison would be to differ

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Anyway its a beautiful poem that you have written.... :)