I'll Wait

I'll wait for you to comment as well so please do even if we're in the next century I'll want you to for the sake of doing it

I'll wait for you
I know the lines are long
and sometimes
you can't find you Dr. Pepper

I'll wait for you
I know you're scared
and sometimes
we dream of not being like this

I'll wait for you
I know how safe it is
and sometimes
how suffocating it can be

I'll wait for you
because I know you'll hold my hand
and sometimes
kiss me like you do in the dark

I'll wait for you
because I know how you feel
and sometimes
I don't but I understand it

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Confuser]

Very lovely indeed. Your writing is full of passion and emotions and could it be the love, we all want and desire, that protects us and shelters us; I don't but I understand it. I'll wait for you and I know how suffocating it can be...great wording and descriptions...because I know you'll hold my hand and sometimes kiss me like you do in the dark. But there are other interpretations, not just of love felt by humans, natures beauty. I just like it. Thank you for sharing it with me. Tom Petty said, waiting is the hardest part...so true, you hit the nail on the head.

[Eagergreen]

Thank you and I like to make my poetry loose for multiple interpretations i wrote it based on an old flame we were both guys

[Confuser]

Well I just loved it! Now it makes me see more clearly, with all the crazy bible belt thumping bigots. Thanks.