Faith in Feeedom

Faith in Feeedom

A Poem by Eagergreen
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My faith is unknown
My future even more so

Who am I?
What am I doing?

I figure these things are more important to others than
I who is comforted by the questions of this nature

A spirit bound is an oxymoron
A mind free is a sponge

© 2015 Eagergreen


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i like the sponge idea...sopping up as much understanding as possible as we look for answers.
sixth line i think you meant "this"

love that line: " a spirit bound is an oxymoron"
there is such truth in that...and i relate to the speaker...faith is a variable these days. and the future even more so.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eagergreen

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you like that and yes I meant this thanks for catching that X) 99% of the time the poems ar.. read more



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i like the sponge idea...sopping up as much understanding as possible as we look for answers.
sixth line i think you meant "this"

love that line: " a spirit bound is an oxymoron"
there is such truth in that...and i relate to the speaker...faith is a variable these days. and the future even more so.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eagergreen

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you like that and yes I meant this thanks for catching that X) 99% of the time the poems ar.. read more

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