Earth and Pianos

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A beautiful woman
who humors her husband
in his mind he controls
the wife is Gaia and her husband Adam

A pianist alone with her
piano finely tuned, together
they make an eerie dirge
the pianist is Selene and the piano the ocean

The two dancers who
move as one they compliment
one is moves forward the other backward
they are Yin and Yang

The world is a movement of two forces
at all times one is moving with another
whether it's competitve, mutual, or complimentary
each relationship is beautiful to see

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great poem, I really liked the last stanza. Good job!

[Eagergreen]

Glad you liked it :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hopefully the movement of two forces is with one another and is complementary...

not just one moving the other, because eventually that movement will just be Away.

i like last line of each stanza, and the overall movement in this poem as well...

jacob

[Eagergreen]

I like myth and adding cultures to my poems the intermingling of cultural ideas really allows us to see that ideas and ethics aren't bound to a nation or a language they are things that define us as humans