Star Wire

This moment was the start of everything I've lived by since that moment please comment

I go back to a time
in the yard quite frequently
that belonged to my neighbor
I laid on my back
in the grass
in a warm summer night
the sky was clear
like an HD movie
I stared at the stars
the Milky Way
I saw the world in the sky
I dream of reliving that night
it changed me forever the night
I knew my alpha and omega
we all have moments when we realize
we realize life and our life
it may not make sense at the time
but not many feelings do
feeling must be untangled
like wires

Author's Note

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Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Very nice anology of our idividual lives.I took note of the stars just last night.I know some people say there is no God but the celestial bodies begs to differ with them.We have a vast and wonderful universe but where did it come from.Christ was the alpha and omega and if we accept him our soul will live forever,if this isn't true we will of died anyway but if true do we dare take that chance and believe not?You wrote from your soul and explained God't thoughts good poem,God bless

[Liv]

Very thought provoking! The only criticisms I have are that you change tenses frequently, but other than that I really enjoyed reading this!